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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 - Advanced)
Topic: Eek! (02/25/10)
What makes tiny Tim go "EEK!"?
- small kids that swipe his favorite ball
- big dogs that prowl with heavy paw
- and gooey aunts who prod his jaw
These things make tiny Tim to shriek!

What makes Timmy’s mum go "EEK!"?
- a little furry got-lost mouse
- a muddy mess within her house
- all creepy things that raise her pulse
These things make Timmy’s mum to shriek!

What makes Timmy’s sis go "EEK!"?
- a hairy, scary spider queen
- a bully boy who's awful mean
- old moldy bread that's now turned green
These things make Timmy’s sis to shriek!

What makes Timmy’s dad go "EEK!"?
- when Tim with fire delights to play
- when Mum shows him the bill to pay
- when sis insists on her own way
These things make Timmy’s dad to shriek!

And so they all do "EEK!" and squeak
as do we all, for we are weak.

But thankfully we have a Knight
who comes to us, e'en in our fright,
and makes us bold
in his strong hold
so all our "EEK"s can turn out right.
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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
03/05/10
Delightful. I enjoyed the whole little family Good job.
Connie Dixon
03/06/10
Loved this and your format was really interesting and fresh. Great content, great writing, very creative. Good job!
Beth LaBuff 
03/08/10
Wow! Very creative and I love your poetic format! Super ending, too!
Genia Gilbert
03/08/10
Good message here. Do we not all indeed go eek? And about so many different things. So glad all the eeks will be someday taken care of.
Brenda Shipman
03/08/10
It took reading it through twice before I picked up on the rhyme and meter, but it did flow the second time through. Cute portrayal of what makes each of the characters "go eek!" Very unique and fun poem.