The Official Writing Challenge
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What a perspective on this topic! I could feel your MC's fear and regret. Nicely done
I feared the same thing when I was a kid, if the lights went out, or the TV flashed the emergency broadcast symbol, I was sure I had been left behind. You did a great job in describing the fear. i also enjoyed the description of the naughty things the MC did. Great writing.
I got saved as an adult -- not from a Christian family. So I never knew young kids went through this, and it was especially interesting to me. You made me understand the young one's viewpoint and confusions.
You really captured the ten-year-old's voice and perspective. I had similar thoughts as a child, especially when it was too quiet in the house, or I couldn't find all my loved ones.
Excellent. From one wisconsinite to another, great job. I wondered this one time and I was an adult. I suspect I'll be reading more of your work. Great job. God bless.
You created drama and suspence in this great story with a 10-year-olds point of view! This is also a good warning!