The Official Writing Challenge
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I think your story was well written, but I was expecting a more dramatic ending.

However, you did leave me with a slight chuckle about how your students actually controlled your planned events. :)
A very charming day in the life of a teacher. Good job, I was anxious to hear more about your teacher. I have the feeling she has an exciting story to tell.
A little flat and a whole lot of telling. Keep writing.