The Official Writing Challenge
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Ohhh... I see... great story!
I truly loved this piece. I cannot commit it to just 'nice', or 'nicely done' kind of comment. I could see and feel the kindness, compassion of our Lord Jesus. It touched my heart deeply-- crying out for hurting people like Tara; Margaret's obedience to be just the simple vessel of kindness and mercy to Tara... encouraged my spirit.

God bless you for the example of your story to many of us who love to do the Lord's bidding. I hope a start of a kind and fruitful friendship between Tara and Margaret-Rose will flourish.

Thank you.
Hey Lisa, congrats on placing 14th in the Level 3 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards:
I'm so impressed with your writing...speaking God's truth in new and refreshing ways. You are an inspiration!