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I could see your grandmother and hear her exclamations. :) Very heart-warming!
Ahhh, good memories are treasures indeed. One small item: your fiance walked up to the house, but then your wife spoke. Easily fixed.
Great story! Reading about your grandmother brought back memories of my own. Really loved this!
A lovely story, and I could see every scene play out. Nice job!
What a lovely tribute to your grandma! I could just hear my own dear "Nana" saying "Oh my!" as I read this. Well done.
So very rich with true characterization and a delight to read. What a lovely, simple, meaningful piece.
I had forgotten how often my own grandmother said that very same thing. I wonder if they are related somehow. By the way you described everything I could picture it all and so very much enjoyed the view.
Very engaging - I want to meet your grandma! I love the scene with the robins.
Hey Jim, congrats on placing in Level 3!