The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a nice even flow in your writing, I enjoyed it very much
Boy I hope this wasn't a true account. If so, not exactly an example of Christians behavior(mornings are no excuse)personally any morning is a good morning (and yes I have aches and pains in the mornings too). Overall writing was good.

Cute story,aren't we blessed when our family knows we get grumpy and loves us anyway.
True or not, Christians are human too. Well written and gave me a big chuckle at the end.
This is one of my favourites this week. I can relate to the aches and pains and missed meds AND the prayers that the hot shower eases the pain. Your story was smooth flowing, and had a great conversational style. I love the Post-It notes being stuck on everything. Well done.
I understand...I have fibro too.
I appreciated the honesty of this piece (we've all been there!), as well as the understanding and grace demonstrated by the family in the end. Great job!