The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
This is a fantastic work! The text elegantly conveys the emotions of each character in this Biblical-era piece.

I look forward to more!
Inspired indeed! Very, very good. It ministered well.
Very authentic voice making the story all the more believable. If this is a "new" approach for you, it's working. Not everyone can write historical fiction so well and bring the characters to life.
11/17/09
This story really put humaness to the story of the woman with the unclean issue!
11/18/09
The title pulled me in and the concept was both creative in approach and effective in delivery. It all felt quite real and authentic. Nice job.
11/18/09
love stories featuring biblical characters. very convincing, true to life.
Incredible job! I loved how you weaved this together from beginning to end...awesome!
Wow...Superbly written and extremely creative take on the topic. Well done!