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You painted a very realistic picture of the child begger in the Honduras. I have seen such children in Haiti, and in the Dominican Republic. It is a very sad sight to see. If this story has its basis in fact, I am glad all the siblings were blessed to escape this sad life. I also am inspired that they are all in the position to be ministering to those in similar circimstances.
The plight of these children is so sad. I enjoyed your writing style and was pleased the story had a happy end.
It is so sad to see children begging and misused. This is a story of hope and you took us on the journey. Good job.
Our many trips to Mexicali revealed the truth in your story. There is a wonderful dentist there that has a very similar story to tell. Great job in story telling and being able to touch my heartstrings.
What an intense, emotional narrative to read. Fantastic job with the tone of the piece...nicely done.