The Official Writing Challenge
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Well, your title certainly didn't disappoint. A lovely lesson in independence and familial love
The title was absolutely intriguing! Good story with a powerful lesson.
Super story...eye catching title...good job!
Boo to the bullies out there - Cheers to the Lord and His plan for you and your kids! What a touching story that had me involved and rooting for you!
I really liked your story. I feel so bad that your children had to go through the torment that they did. My children, too, had similar circumstances. Isn't it great to know that despite all that our children grew up to be fine adults. Even better than those that pointed the finger.
The only critique I would have about your story is the first sentence could probably grab the reader more to make us to want to read on. The title you chose perked my curiosity though.
Thanks for that great story,