The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/09
I liked your use of dialog in this. Cricket must be an angel. The surprise as to the "boys" identity and Cricket's response to this was heart-warming. Great lesson too!
04/14/09
I liked the message you conveyed here. We have all gifts to use for God's glory and your MC surely found hers. Spiritually growing? Aren't we all! Good piece.