The Official Writing Challenge
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You offer a great lesson in God's mercy toward human weakness. I will say there were a few sentences I had to re-read - it took me a minute to make sense of them (but maybe it's just me on a Monday morning).
Thanks for posting.
Blessings, Lynda
Good job. Packed a punch in few words. God bless you.
"After all, I had the perfect example" is the perfect ending to a very appropriate story! One or two teensy stumbling places (typos?) did not distract from a powerful story that kept my attention. Certainly fits the theme.
A nice article full of truth. Enjoyed! Joanne
Steven, Congratulations on receiving a Highly Commended Award for the Level 3 Champion Challenge, together with your excellent 8th Place win for the Editors' Choice. We had a huge field of entries for this particular topic - the biggest ever - so to place in the top 8 is really a great credit to you. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)
Was just reading through some of the past entries and reread this one. I remember how it touched me at the time. It was a terrific article. The rereading evoked the same sense of admiration for this man. What a great story!