The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
Sweet story! I just love grandfathers and grandsons together.

I'm assuming that Tommy's about 5--but some of the things he said, especially toward the end, seemed older than that age, at least to me.

Nice job of relating the shoelaces to real life!
09/19/08
I enjoyed the simplicity of the shoelace (first) lesson. I could see the two leaning their heads together as they worked on tying this shoe. The ice-cream at the end adds such a heart-warming tough to this.
The grandfather's patience toward his grandson reminds me a bit of God's patience toward us in the things He has to teach us as his children. Good job.
09/20/08
Awww...I love this little conversation about life's lessons. What sweet, well drawn characters. A very nice story.
Very sweet! I was right there with them, and loved the way grandpa used an everyday experience as a teaching moment. The only thing I had a hard time picturing was Tommy's hair skimming the underside of the bench. --Probably one of those international differences in wording or else a type of bench I wasn't picturing! :-)

I enjoyed this charming story!
Cute story! I especially liked the kid's comment about if he would need to learn to talk to grandkids--just like something a little kid would ask!
09/22/08
What a great picture of a grandfather teaching his grandson about life. I love the wise and caring grandfather and the inquisitive child - well portrayed.
09/22/08
It reminds me that we need to keep our eyes open for those teachable moments in life and take advantage of them. Thanks!
09/24/08
Great story. I am trying to logically decide what the first lesson really was. It's not the shoelaces because he had already learned the worm on a hook lesson. I think the first lesson learned is that we must all learn lessons in life.

Well done.
09/24/08
Tommy's first lesson is a lesson we are learning right now, (that there are always things to learn) and the lesson is tough, but passable.

Great lesson.
This is very sweet. I like how the grandfather used the moment to plant seeds of thought in his grandson's sweet little mind. Great job!
You hit it right on the head with the "why" questions. Must be a 5 year old!
Great job!
09/25/08
This was precious...I loved the little boy. Great job!