The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/08
Just love all the different imagery for truth, giving us so many facets of it. Very well done.
09/08/08
Truth in poetry. It's beautiful Jan, and captures all the facets of truth - just like the jewel.
09/09/08
So many images that are, again and again, apt descriptions about what truth is. You've covered all of the many facets and usages, and beauties of truth...leading right up to the Author of Truth. Wonderful!
09/10/08
This is beautiful! Very well crafted! No mention of dare, though.

I could see this overlaid on a beautiful photograph and used as home decor!
This is lovely. I think I liked this stanza the best:

"Truth is like the ocean,
Returning to the shore,
Constantly,
Faithfully,
Hour by hour."

Two thumbs up, Miss Verna.
09/11/08
I love everything about this… and especially the "jewel" stanza. :) You are very good at "free verse".