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The descriptions are very visual drawing the reader into the story. I enjoyed the writing style. Excellent job.
God's perfect timing amazes me. One has to be ready for God to act. I like the descriptions in this piece. Good job.
Your title fits your story of hope perfectly. Your vivid descriptions keep the reader pulled in. I was so glad for your mc to call and for her parents to be receive her.
Vivid descriptions, engaging story
Beautiful story. Well done.
This was a very well told story. I felt like I was sitting next to the girl watching the entire event unfold. You did a good job of putting the reader into her head and helping them understand her thoughts.

Stories like this happen all too often in real life, and I praise God whenever he reaches the lost like this.

Thank you for sharing. This was an enjoyable read.
Oh, I wish I could hear the REST of the story. Of course, I know we can fill it in. This is a fantastic story. It is quite like like a poem I wrote: "The Lights of Home." But I won't take away from this story by comparing it. This is the kind of story I so much like to hear: A Prodigal coming home...WONDERFUL!...hELEN