The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this story; nice "trick" tying in the title with the monkey's name. Good job.
Very comical, and yes, definitely a very "different" type pet, er, ah.."service" type animal story. However, to be precise, the weekly Topic IS the "Family Pet", and therefore being a bit Picky-u-nish myself, I find this delightful, nice, witty, well written story does not exactly Fit the appointed topic to a "T". There's your "red ink", okay? (*.*)!
Nice story, captivating. The title drew me in. The writing held me. I'm glad I'm not George. I don't think I could learn to like or even appreciate having a monkey around.
The story was very well done. I was glad to see George's prayers answered.
I enjoyed this unique and entertaining read, and like the imp-plication of a happy ending.
Congratulations on taking 9th place in your level with this piece, Molina!
And you placed 32nd overall. Awesome!