The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, I liked this one! Good job!
Interesting view of what the resurrection may have been like today. Good job.
Visions of "Cotton Patch Gospel" presented in a different genre. Nice work.
Very clever.
Very creative!
Wow! I didn't get to this one last week but it's so deserving of its second place win! Wonderful & creative. Loved every word! Congrats!
Blessings, Lynda
Infidelity island LOL Very creative read! Enjoyed it!
Very well done, Anthony. Take an old story give it a new setting and it really does cause one to reconsider the importance of the story in the first place. - Ben
Very dramatic, Anthony -- could easily be converted for use as an effective Easter skit, also. Congratulations on a job well-done -- great writing!
Wow! What a great modern retelling! I LOVE it. Great fun.
You must be a newscaster yourself to write such a realistic dialogue! What a great read!
Catchy start, grabbed my attention. Very credible newscast, dialogue and characters. Creative take on the theme and an enjoyable read.
Very impressive writing. The story held me breathless all the way through the reading, and I was hanging on every word. You are clearly gifted in story telling.
I thought it was incredibly imaginative. Be encouraged and continue to write. I look forward to reading more of your work!
Anthony, this is the first chance I've had to leave feedback for the last couple of topics, and am only getting to do it now as I do the final editing for the "Celebrations" book.

Well ... what can I say? This gave me goosebumps. You caught the power and mood of the scene so well - and putting the events of Christ's death and resurrection into a contemporary setting was a brainwave. It brought it all home in quite a dramatic way. Well done - as your entries continue to be.

If you haven't already moved up to Level 3, then you need to head that way now. I hope you'll be jumping into this quarter's Challenges.

Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)