The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW!!! A book in the making. Excellent. i can't wait to read more. Hope it will be soon.
Eesh.. how terrifying. My stomach hit the ground at the end. I will be sure to hold my children tight!!! Wow.
I think you did a good job of describing what it's like for a small town girl seeing the city for the first time. (our town had one blinking red light :) ) Oh, you left me hanging… you've described every child and every mother's worst nightmare. (hopefully there's another mismatched mother and child nearby that could switch.)
Continued where? You left us hanging in fear for the small child, in the inner city no less. Come on, this deserves an ending.
Certainly descriptive, but not enough to tie the title in to even begin a story.
I hope I get to read he continuation of this riveting story. You left me wanting to learn more about this child and his mother.