The Official Writing Challenge
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Ouch. His actions spoke volumes. I like the way you chose to give a glimmer of hope at the end.
Not sure how this related to topic, yes he had a double life but his actions in both "lives" spoke volumes. The congregation made their mistake by trusting in the man rather than the message he was bringing. The message doesn't change even when it's delivered by imperfect vessels. Your overall mechanics of writing was good.