The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/08
Lovely story--send it to "Birds and Blooms" magazine--I bet they'll snatch it right up.
02/09/08
Delightful entry. This warmed my heart - and what a lovely lesson.
Praise the Lord for this bright, lovely story! The lesson is very quick to grasp; plus your use of beautifully descriptive words flow like smooth honey!
Thank you.
What a clever and original way to portray this theme! I smiled when I came to the part about the "sparrow ministry", but the next paragraph really packed a punch as I realized the truth of it! Great ending, when you saw those sparrows in a new light. I do too. A wonderful piece, full of both personalities!