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Very interesting. Never quite heard of this sort of view before. Your title drew me in. Good job.
Great title, and a very convicting message. You expressed yourself very well - love the voice.
Great message tucked inside here. This especially spoke to me since we had to move which meant a change of churches. You're so right -- you can look at a new church and see all that's wrong or you can look to see all that's right. There's a powerful lesson here and you handled it well. Great job! Christmas blessings! :)
This is excellently done. I heard someone say once that if there were a perfect church, they wouldn't let me in. The wake-up of the narrator, along with the humility, is very good.
Ouch! This is a good, swift kick—and a well delivered one. Nice work.
I like the honesty and the wisdom expressed here. An example of using soliloquy effectively instead of dialogue. With a longer version of this, dialogue may be needed to break it up a little, and illustrate your point. But this is good.
Dianne -- Every Christian in EVERY church should read this. You've written this perfectly with so much wisdom contained inside. Cute title too. Thanks! :)