The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Great ending! I really enjoyed reading this warm-hearted story.

FYI--The word "Bible" should always be capitalized...and be careful with spelling: surly/surely and shown/shone jumped out at me.

Those nitpicks aside, this was a lovely story, full of grace and hope.
12/08/07
Good story and I like the character you created, too.
12/09/07
Wonderfully descriptive - and I just love love LOVE the last paragraph. You absolutely blessed me. Just lovely.
Very descriptive writing. Well done.
12/11/07
Oh, so cozy! You definitely showed the warmth of Christian love. There was a misspelling - "surely" and "Bible" should be capitalized. It's God's Word.
Well done! I could feel the welcome!
12/14/07
Congratulations, Frank, on placing 12th in your level, and 36th overall!