The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
Wonderful!
12/01/07
This is a very nice story. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
Oh, I did like this one! It was a teensy bit wordy with recounting everything that Hattie had done (I guess I just like the read the WHOLE story all for myself-lolz) but this was so much fun! Especially the last line with how well the crown fit. What a great reminder of where our 'real treasure' lies. Great writing!
12/07/07
Congratulations on your 2nd place. This is really, really good. You tell a beautiful story of our meeting with the Lord. Great job with the topic.
12/08/07
Congrats on your placing. Great story of humility and a gift of service. Told from heaven's perspective is creative too.