The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/07
Thank you for this very informative article!

As a rule of thumb, avoid starting any article with a definition. You want something that will really "hook" your readers--something active, fascinating, and creative.

You've obviously done a lot of research into this, and it is greatly appreciated.
11/05/07
Great research.
Well written and informative article. The points are well taken. Interesting.
11/06/07
Lots of good information here.

I would have tried to "hook" your readers by starting with a story. Maybe just telling the first part, and then ending with the rest of the story.

Again, there's some great information here. You obviously put some work into this.