The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/07
What a wonderful "voice" this has. Good work.
10/13/07
I really enjoyed the rhythm of this piece. I could almost picture an animated version of it on stage with music behind it. Drums, of course. This is powerful stuff.
10/14/07
This was very good. As I read on I figured out it was probably an Indian and the ending confirmed that. Am I right? Nice work...
Laury