The Official Writing Challenge
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A beautifully written and ntriguing story. Vivid descriptions that made the action and characters come alive. Interesting analogy between the present situation and the account of Jacob--though the abrupt transition confused me at first.

The story left me curious as to Sammy's condition. What made him sick on the bus? It brought to mind the insulin reactions sometimes suffered by my diabetic mother.

Great title--this also sparked my curiosity!
Your reader feels the anguish of the mother in your writing. Your descriptions are excellent.
Your title is so catchy, I just had to drop by and see what it was about! Your story sure is intriguing, and I would love to know how it all turned out. I would guess, by the scripture reference, that what matters is the trust in God to stand by His word to be with us, no matter what the circumstances. Good story!