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Breathing quickens
Carelessness overrides
Dangerous thoughts enter
Exasperating minutes pass by
Frustrations become uncontrolled
Graciousness no longer enters the mind
Harm becomes the cornerstone of the heart
Infuriation enters an already impatient thought
Justice triumphs and overrules as it seeks its prey
Kindred spirits fade into the dark chasm of oblivion
Ludicrous conditions add to the madness of the moment
Madness rises up and churns from the center of the brain
Notorious enemies blur reality and cause insanity to take over
Optimism is no longer an option as the bright side does not exist
Pessimism is the true reality and key to the forthcoming confrontation
Quarrelling eventually postpones this particular unresolved disagreement
Rivalry has become the primeval essence of the pending state of future affairs
Saliva begins to drip and the tongue hangs out as the mind prepares for contest
Twisted thoughts overpower the true definition of what realty has, at last, become
Urgent priorities overwhelm the eyes' ability to pierce without irrational logic or fact
Values are nonexistent and the mind plays games, while idealism reigns supreme within
Wisdom is great but has no place when the equation of success becomes the ultimate goal
X-ray vision would be a great advantage to penetrate the mind of the antagonist challenger
Youthfulness has the advantage over the skills of the experienced, reality checks in - it’s time
Zealous passion rides against the wind, leaps the fence in one single bound and recovers his bone.
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'Optimism is no longer an option as the bright side does not exist/
Pessimism is the true reality and key to the forthcoming confrontation.'
Them's fightin' words. :-)
And I LOVED the form.
Kudos on an excellent piece!!!