The Official Writing Challenge
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Uh-oh. I'm dangling on the end of the "Judge-not-lest-you-be-judged" spear, too! Wonderful and enlightening look at how we view ourselves and measure each other up and down the aisles, week after week, Sunday after Sunday. Ouch!
While reading your entry, I was thinking that "all they have is religion"...then I got to thinking that "hey I'm JUDGING them" and would be no better than they are... So, I guess your message convicted me.

Don't you just love the beehive hair-do? :) Love your use of it in this story. You were very creative in this. Thanks!
Very creative - and definitely deeper than it appears on the first read. Good job.