The Official Writing Challenge
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Creative take on "Christmas." Reminded me a bit of the pool table entry from last week - the perpective of an inanimate object yet with a profound message.
Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
I love reading the story from the cave's point of view. Very creative. Maybe I'll try different povs like this. Very interesting....
Another thought, you could write this as a script for children's ministries. I can just imagine the scene! And such fun it would be to see.
Loved the way you showed the cave at birth and cave at death, burial and Resurrection. Loved the VICTORY TONE!
What a clever way to approach Christmas! Very creative!
Great job. I really enjoyed the connection between the caves and the point about the rocks crying out.