The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting diary read. I really didn't expect the ending. I was sure they would stay forever.
06/01/07
I loved how you wrote this as it sounded so real I felt I was there with her. The ending too surpised me that they returned back home. Very creative:)
06/02/07
Enjoyed the format you used to tell this story, and liked the "there's no place like home" ending! Great writing!
06/04/07
Wonderfully written - it almost feels like the introduction to a much larger adventure... "Ila Mae in the City," mebbe? Good job.
06/06/07
Interesting read - the emotions were very real. Nice job.