The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent! That ending is great.
Which of us can say we are ready? We can only squeeze our eyes shut, grab Father's hands, and scream as the roller coaster hits the first dive!
Great job!
05/31/07
WOW -- the true adventure awaits for Christians who are willing to take up the cross and follow wherever He leads. Great job!
05/31/07
Ah! The Christian life. The greatest adventure of all. I really like this. It reminds us that it's all worth it.
Excellent writing. "This adventure will cost you everything" sums it up. Good job.
06/01/07
You spoke to my heart...thank you!
06/04/07
Very powerful - I especially loved the last line.
06/04/07
Great poem...strikes at the heart of what it means to follow Jesus.
06/06/07
This I really enjoyed. Super job. God Bless.
06/06/07
What a powerful piece about the "adventure to end all adventures"! I absolutely loved the ending! Good job! :)
I love your title! It fits this so well. Easily presented and beautifully written. I can't think of anything to improve on it. Excellent job. The last paragraph/stanza, was the best. Amazing.