The Official Writing Challenge
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This left me a little confused. It's very good, but somehow I missed the point of "all I see is red". Since I don't know a lot about poetry, others will probably relate much better. However, I really enjoyed it with that one exception.
Very cool lines: "I don’t like to ask for help.
I can’t do this all myself
But I’m just that brave and dumb to want to try."
I thoroughly enjoyed!
The flow is good, but I didn't get it. I'm not into poetry, so it could be me.
Good try! I guess I'm a little dense, 'cause I never got the point. Not the author's's mine.
I like the voice of this poem and I definitely appreciate your transparency.
This would make a great song! I enjoyed this one; good job.