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Beautifully written!.....and true :)
What a heart-warming, "put you in the Christmas spirit" story..... It puts in perspective what Christmas is really all about. Loved it!
Very creative! I liked it a lot.
You capture the frenetic busness of Christmas so well, my heart was pumping. Then took us the a place of peace.
I loved the second half of this in its peaceful simplicity.
Talk about putting you in the mood for Christmas (in May, no less). I wrote a piece that kind of attempted to make the same point, but you said it oh, so much better with this story.
Very nice ... detailing how simple Christmas really is. Thank you for a nice piece!
you took us on a stroll through a frantic shallow world yo a niche of peace. Thanks for letting us rest beside the characters. Well done piece [peace].