The Official Writing Challenge
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A very well written letter. This sentence summed up the desparation of the situation and even perhaps loss of faith/hope, perfectly:

'Wilber Smith said it was probably just another angel, coming with bad news.'
How heartbreaking! I love this little narrorators voice. So like a child. I really think that making this a letter to anthor girl her age was a very wise hcoice that played up the little girl's innocence. Keep up the great work!
You captured the time and the feeling of the characters well. Nice job!
Well written! I loved this story, the little girl's perspective on things.
Awww how touching and sweet. I love this kind of story and I feel sure you'll place with this one. Kudos.
You made the period live. Well done.
Your descriptions are excellent. I could feel the sorrow. Wonderful entry!
Charming and a great read...thanks for sharing this story!