The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/07
We can all learn from this. Good message - kept my interest all the way through.
05/08/07
You certainly got to the root of our "tongue problem" by showing us the correlation between the state of our heart and the words of our mouth! Well-written with a very important message! Good job! :)
05/08/07
Good writing! You found a very palatable way to deliver a bit of medicine...easy and entertaining to read, and a very good point.
05/10/07
Very descriptive, with the 2 friends.