The Official Writing Challenge
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A well written story with a very good message. It might just be me, but I would have liked to have seen a little dialogue, just to break up the narrative a little. Apart from this, I enjoyed reading this one.
Very well thought out and I enjoyed the narrative. It was truly a mystery!
Well written story. I went along on the search for the ruby.
This is an excellent mystery story. It, too, was wondering where the ruby could be.
oops--not "it" but "I"
A wonderful story. I love the extent of the search - to the marble bag, even, so creative. A real sense of place and strong characterization. I just love the word 'purloined.' yeggy
Fun to read, enjoyable. I liked how the detective thought, searching everywhere and especially th end when he suddenly decided to check in the bluebird's nest.
Ah the bird did it! I thought this was well done!
All the little details and description absolutely made this story. I was engaged from beginning to end. (Good to see you back!) - Joanne