The Official Writing Challenge
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This is good. The meter and rhyme fit well. I'm not a poetry expert, but I believe you are supposed to capitalize every line. Keep up the good work.
This flowed nicely with a great message. I enjoyed this a lot.
Intriguing title and thought-provoking, well-written poem! Good job! :)

This poem is really great! I can't believe I missed it, as I actually read quite a few entries this week. I especially like the final two stanzas, but your rhyme and rhythm were perfect all the way through. This is a winner in my book!
Poetically perfect with many thoughts to ponder. Edy, as usual, you have penned (or is that "pecked") something very creative.