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Topic: Gone Fishing (02/01/07)
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TITLE: At Grandpa's Cabin | Previous Challenge Entry
By Eleanor Joyce
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muffled steps on gritty path
two figures in the dawn’s half light
one tall and stooped, the other small and spry
inky lake all rimmed with trees
wooden dock silvered with age
two tackle boxes stocked and ready
one dented metal, the other bright blue plastic
bamboo pole worn smooth with years
shiny new rod, never used before
two hopeful smiles, combined anticipation
one pale sun spreading streaks of light
two upturned buckets, waiting to be sat on
one coffee can, asquirm with wriggling worms
two shiny hooks, curving smooth and pointed
one gnarled hand baiting both with care
two tiny plips as lines thrown into water
little ripples marking where they fell
two buttered biscuits wrapped in paper napkins
one red plaid thermos and a plastic cup
a camaraderie that needs no talking
just waiting for a nibble or a bite
one special friendship spanning generations
gone fishing – just grandpa and his boy
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