The Official Writing Challenge
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I can't believe this hasn't had a comment yet ... it is very good. (I think it is just a slow week for comments).

I particularly liked the interweaving of the minister's words, with the acute observations of his actions and demeanor, and the reflective lessons learnt from them. These are skilfully woven together to make a thoughtful and interesting piece. Well done!
Nicely written and a good flow. I like the 'essense of sin' - nice job - you get the point across nicely.
"If you come away the same, then you haven't really met God." So true! You have shared a very nice message throughout. Good job!