The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this is good! Unfortunately, it's also a sad commentary on our society. I like the format. You hooked me right away. Nicely done.
Very clever. May we all be as "deluded" as Ms. Harper.
Very sad but very well written. Congrats on your win.
Congratulations on your win! Wow! What a sobering article, indeed. Such a dark commentary on today's society although, unfortunately, I can testify that this is not too far-fetched. Great writing--no wonder it placed! Congratulations once again! :)
Really 'enjoyed' reading this provoking story. Great format. consistent voice. You made me care for the MC. Well done and congratulations.
I read this with a lot of interest. You accurately captured the voluntary ignorance of some doctors. Congratulations for the win.