The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I love this! What a beautiful reminder of where our Hope truly lies.
Poetry is definitely not my forte, but this flowed so well and the cadence is so consistent and balanced. On top of that, the message was wonderfully constructed.

Usually if a poem doesn't flow well in the first stanza, I don't continue, but this one sucked me in and, before I knew it (or wanted) it was over.
Please post more of your poems at Poetry and Poets of God:
Extremely well done. Rhythm and meter=A; Subject matter=A; Poetic ability=A+. Nice job - great style. A real, genuine Poet!
Yes, the appealing flow of your rhythm and rhyme carries us right into the beautifully made point at the end. Very well done!