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10/19/06
Well said - thank you for expressing these truths about policemen. I make it a habit to thank police officers when I get the opportunity. They ARE heroes!
10/20/06
This has a very casual, face to face talk kind of feel. I enjoyed reading it. Good message too.
10/21/06
You certainly evoked feelings of appreciation and respect for the police. Your argument was clear and logically developed. I did think that your title was rather misleading – it suggested a theme that you then didn’t pursue. Also I would be wary of naming individual ministers as you have – even errant shepherds get a second chance at redemption.
10/21/06
A very conversational style (maybe a bit too much in my opinion in a couple spots) - but definitely a delight to read. You definitely made some excellent points!
10/25/06
An excellent way to hono ou men and women in unifom. I tuely enjoyed you convesational style. Geat Job!!!! Keep up the good wok. God bless.