The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/06
Very nice! A little glitch in the paragraph starting with "June, with a ragged tissue", but other than that, it is well written. On top of that, it's a lovely, heart-warming story! Great job! :)
09/16/06
Not exactly an earth shattering problem, but a sweet story nevertheless. Well done.
09/18/06
Having a perfectionist mother-in-law can be very intimidating at first. I know!! But, sounds like this lady has some good help. One little note: she 'sat' down the bag - should read 'set'. Easy way to remember - you sat down on the chair; you set the bag down on the table.