The Official Writing Challenge
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A really beautiful and refreshing read! I loved it! However, needs some editing, which take away from the fantastic story here. (by editing,I mean some typos, spelling, etc. small stuff) Great Job!
Oh wow -- too realistic! But making the plastic tree in the corner Sara Sue's garden was ingenious! Aside from the grammatical, spelling, and punctuation problems, this is a wonderful piece! Fix 'em up and you go yourself a heart-warming story that will bless countless others! Nice work! :)
Oldville??! ;) Very cute story. I'm still wondering if Sam is male or female ... but I loved the interaction with Sara Sue. Good work.
I would have started with this line "“Tell that man we don’t want to hear that dang-blasted new high falootney music! We want to hear ‘In the Garden!’"
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