The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
An interesting concept. I love the way you compared melody to God and the harmony to those of us who follow Him. Good writing!
09/04/06
Lots of common sense and truth here - but needs a "juicy piece of bait, an anecdote or an intriguing lure" in the beginning...to reach out and grab your readers attention so that they will stay for the good message that follows. (just a helpful hint from a reader first, and a writer second); but nicely done and well written.