The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative! I had to read it several times, and still I'm sure I probably missed something. The verse from Luke really pulled it all together.
I agree that this is suitable for cornfields or battlefields! I read it three times! Lots of meaning here. My favorite:

Voluminous, the books that could be written
(About the foolish choices we have made)

How true!

wow... so many powerful words (of which a few I may have to consult a dictionary), written so well- packed full of meaning!I also enjoyed the title!
Definitely one I wanted to read over and over - very deep, but wonderfully meaningful! I feel like I will glean another truth each time I read this wonderful poem!
Creative and powerful! I agree, it cries out to read again and again!
Wow, Edy. Powerful stuff here. Your vocabulary was packed with images and emotion. Your second stanza was excellent.

This is a kind of writing that I have yet to fully try. You make me want to while at the same time I know I couldn't come close to this piece of work.