The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Tears formed in my eyes as I read the Rest of Your story; reminding me of my own mother and the rest of Her story. Beautifully written...and an enjoyable and heartfelt read! Thank you.
07/20/06
I've read lots of tributes here on FaithWriters, but this one definitely took a unique approach, with a very readable voice.
07/20/06
Your writing inspires me with a flood of memories, of people whose lives need to be remembered in stories such as this. Thank you for sharing yours.
07/21/06
Um, I'm crying right now. Can I properly critique this story? I hope you don't mind, the tears ARE the critique. God bless you.
I loved the whole piece. You did a wonderful job of conveying your story in a thoughtful, heartfelt manner that captured the reader. As I read, I could picture the whole story. As a committed wife, mother and Christian, I pray that my children and husband will treasure my presence in their lives as your family did.
As you write, continue to dig deep - it works!