The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
What a marvelous play on words! I thoroughly enjoyed this.
07/21/06
Soles and Souls. Very cute! Nicely done, easy to read, good flow - good account of Biblical fiction, keeping true to the word. Thanks.
07/22/06
Very, very good story, and a great reminder that God cares as much about the "little" things in our lives (soles) as He does the big (souls). One correction, though. I think you meant desert floor instead of dessert floor. "Dessert" is the sweet stuff we eat after a meal. : )