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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Great (07/06/06)
Good God is Great!
Let's not make a mistake....
Destiny is our fate...
And God is our destiny

Life is not always what we make it;
Let's not fake it....
Live life to the full...
Life is delicate...don't break it

But God is greater than any one little
life;
There's no need to fight for rights...
When those rights restrict our access to God unnecessarily

Yes, God is good
He exists as He should....
Within the realms of destiny
And throughout the known universe....

Love God as He is...
Don't imagine Him to be another...
dangerous dude that thumps and thunders...
But know Him as a friend...
and don't cease to wonder.....

And don't forget Christ....
who is not only nice....
but exists as the glory of Heaven
Oh, what are we missing?

Finally don't close the door
on what happened before...
until we determine what's in store
when we reach God in Heaven

And know for a fact
that we may well react
when we acknowledge God's greatness...
and Heaven

(Thank you God for your mercies, greatness, love and creations....O
Majestic One!)
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Date
Delores Baber
07/14/06
Rap's not my thing, mostly because I don't always hear the words, but seeing it laid out like this gives is power. I think I would like to hear a Rap group use your piece. God and Great: those two words are a no-brainer.
Jan Ackerson
07/17/06
I got a kick out of the phrase "Don't imagine Him to be another dangerous dude who thumps and thunders..."
Deborah Porter 
07/22/06
Hi Ian. I'm sorry to contact you this way, but I'm not sure if you have the private messenger and I don't want to risk you not seeing this. I need to talk to you about your "walk" challenge entry. It's to do with the word count. Could you send me a private message with your email address, and I'll explain. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)