The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
My only suggestion for this devotonal/sermonette would be to break down the paragraphs into shorter ones to make it more Reader friendly; Eternal Life IS the goal we are all seeking and looking forward to...thanks for sharing.
06/23/06
There is so much truth here! Good job. To make this piece stand out from other "teaching" pieces, consider interjecting something to give it an extra bit of sparkle. I'd be interested, for example, in reading more about your life before you came to God. Thanks for this well-thought-out piece.
06/27/06
This is solid, well put together; perhaps a little more paragraphing as the lead sentences tell you how to end a pragraph.