The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/25
Strong teaching here, but para breaks will help us to absorb the truths more readily.
Thank you for showing that frenemy relationships don’t always start out that way. They can grow from something sweet to something very undesirable, and the stories you chose illustrate this so well. However, if you have several Bible verses from the same chapter to quote in one paragraph, I would consider merging them into one quote as you did in the first paragraph instead of quoting them individually as you did in the rest of your paragraphs.